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PS, I'm new here, so idk how to post a direct reply to you guys. it's just my personal opinion.Īnyway thank you for your opinions, I'll edit my review when I can. I've read VN that does a good job at both story and H scene, so I may be biased here. Since a VN is longer, I just hoped they'd develop their relationship better in this one, perhaps more events etc. So to me even if it's hentai, it's heartwarming to watch.
I played this game because I liked the OVA anime of this series (which is hentai) And despite being shorter the OVA has better writing and development imo, showing how they both cared about each other etc. So I get it if you believe I'm hoping for too much. Okay I didn't realize this should be classified as nukige. You played a nukige and were hoping for a good plot? The defining element of nukige is that porn always takes precedence over the plot. You know you can say "masturbate" and "sex" on the internet right? Also skipping scenes in this kind of defeats the purpose. I won't recommend using earphones if you're sensitive like me. There are also technical issues that annoy me, like the voice of VA getting loud and quiet constantly. I know, again, I may be asking for too much, but I still hoped that their relationship gets better developed with more events, as in the OVA, (I'm not gonna spoil it for you), since in a VN writers are given more time to elaborate.Īlthough I skipped through, but it doesn't look very lewd compared to modern VN, certainly. Started dating, holding hands, eating lunch at school, have sex. It's not as interesting to read, cuz the events are rather cliche. Sono Hanabira ni Kuchizuke o: Kuchibiru to Kiss de Tsubuyaite Reviews, News, Descriptions, Walkthrough and System Requirements :: Game Database - SocksCap64. I read this VN cuz I watched the OVA of this series, where it is showed that the two in relationship cared a lot about each other, making the whole episode including H scenes really heartwarming to watch.īut in comparison I don't dig this VN's characters that much. This one though, is very short, 1.5 hour for me to play through.Ī comment below pointed out that this is nukige, so I could be expecting too much regarding the plot, but nevertheless here's my opinion: Their later works may be better, and I think I'm willing to give them a try when I can. Note that this game came out in 2006 and was made by a doujin group, so note that I'm kinda being harsh to judge it with today's standards.
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